http://sweetspicyhot.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] sweetspicyhot.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] yukitsubute 2011-11-24 11:08 pm (UTC)

New Pikame! Wow this was really intense. What Kame endured was so horrible. At least Kame left, and he has Pi as a friend who can help him. Pi really is a great in this situation, offering comfort and tending to Kame's wounds. i am really interested to see how this develops. Already Kame is seeking comfort from Pi at night because he cannot deal with what has happened to him.

I think you did a great job with Pi's reactions here from anger to disbelief, and when he tries to think about how Kame feels.

I think that often people in Kame's situation are slowly cut off from friends and family. In this situation, Kame came to Pi, but Pi still was stunned when he saw the older bruises on Kame.

Thanks for this. Can't wait for the next.

Hugs, hearts, and friends.:D :D :D

PS I am a little concerned about you my friend, and your feet. I hope you are resting and warm.:D

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